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You Left Your Brownies (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

This happiness beyond comparison Sprung from a night of passion So fulfilling I can barely contain my joy I smile sweetly when the memories Twist inside me I want to kiss you again Before I wake in a world gone mad. For when I lay here with you time ceases. And the sun doesn’t rise, Until you leave. Then reality sinks in, and I Must conquer the greater evils That grow with time. So kiss me one last time Before you leave so I can enjoy These last few moments Of bliss before corruption settles in To taint the day jg

Freethinker1602 20-Nov-03/12:28 PM
I wrote this after having a good time with him and I was making him brownies just about once a week. He left them because he'd forgotten about them and so had I. I'd hidden them as insentive for his "being a good boy"




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