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All the rain has fallen (Free verse) by fair12
All the rain has fallen Sunday, and all the rain has fallen a limerick, melodious and sad beats along the lonesome shore. I think I know the chorus, the soft hum from memory, but it, like summer’s last butterflies pass beyond my grasp. I’m waiting for winter’s gray passing, for understanding to burst as though a thunderclap. yet reason, like spring is so far off.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5413
Posted: December 17, 2003 8:06 AM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2003 8:06 AM PST
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[8] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 17-Dec-03/11:56 AM | Reply
Not bad 't all.
[10] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 17-Dec-03/12:08 PM | Reply
winter as a loss of reason - love it.
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