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The Bus (Free verse) by Dovina
A bus drove in
to vacant land
millennia ago
so wise men say
unloaded folks
sped away
left skidmarks in the sand
The dumped-out strangers
bred and spread
til earth they filled and bled
just to get them fed
All the children know
the ancient honored bus
learned in pew
or studied in a chair
because without a ride
their people never came
and they but bits of clay
Some say they know the driver
read his promise
never to forsake
Others say the bus
maneuvered on its own
a mathematic kind of tram
But none of them
for all their understanding
even knows the grass
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5405
Posted: November 30, 2005 8:33 PM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2005 8:33 PM PST
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