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Cornerstone (Free verse) by darkshark
Kiss me once but lightly
I have no time to linger here
With the cool, thick mountain air
Passing through my mind
Iâll see you again
On the other side
Where the greenery is less green
The springs a bit less fresh
Yet there we will build a new home
We will place a brick, a cornerstone
Smile and be glad
Thereâs nothing more that can be done
By the hands of one lone man
Kiss me once but lightly
There are many miles left to spare
My feet wonder like a Pilgrim
My hands shake like a drunken man
The frost is biting carefully at the corners of my eyes
Leaving behind nothing but the pain of natureâs lies
Sometime I will reach the mountainâs other side
And there in the shadow of the rising sun
We will lay down a brick and raise up a home
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9458
Posted: December 31, 2003 9:41 PM PST; Last modified: December 31, 2003 9:41 PM PST
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I like the refrain - you shall have a snowman (8)