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I cant stand you (Free verse) by sk8rs_rule_all
I cant stand you your making me blue. You annoy me, cant you see? Your the reason im not normal, you smother me you always bother me you always bug me!! I cant even breathe! I cant even see, a way out. I dont like you, dont you understand? I cant stand you, your ugly, your sick, your fat, your a fuckhead! You make me mad when i should be glad. You make me cry I'D WISH YOU DIE! Why do i feel this? This isn't bliss, this is hell you never leave me alone. I need a phone to call for help i cant do it on my own because you SMOTHER me. You smother me You smother me!!!! Just die aready, i wont cry i'll laugh. I'll be glad, and no longer mad!!! You'll be out of my life i want a knife so i can kill you myself. Dont get near me dont talk to me just disappear and dont bother to reappear. You are a worthless piece...of...shit, you lardass motherfucking smother me to death bastard!!!! I dont want your love, i just.....want you gone...now. (This was wrote in dedication to a boy who liked me, who thought i was cool, who thought i was hot, who thought everything of me. He was annoying, he smotherd me and never left me alone, his name was Dylan)

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3908
Posted: December 28, 2003 2:21 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2003 2:21 PM PST
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[9] Plaidypus @ 67.122.109.254 | 28-Dec-03/3:07 PM | Reply
Awesome!! (Don't you think its a bit cruel, though? Don't tell me that YOU'VE never been rejected before by somebody you were crushing on...). Nonetheless, if you recategorized this as a pimple poem, its good shit.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 28-Dec-03/6:39 PM | Reply
"You make me mad
when i should be glad."

"Just die aready,
i wont cry
i'll laugh.
I'll be glad,
and no longer mad!!!"

classic pimple.
[7] richa @ 81.178.229.91 | 29-Dec-03/9:24 AM | Reply
Rather a round about way to say you hate someone for smothering you.

Anyway, I'm on dylans side.

Also read your 'about page': 'if I write poetry as bad as I skateboard I will end up with a broken arm' (something like that.

Classic nonsense, ace, spike milligan would've been proud.
[8] cat @ 64.164.169.80 | 3-Aug-04/7:16 AM | Reply
I totally feel you here, but you know I thought it was about a parent...you are funny. Your poems are very direct.
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