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Live for Die for (Free verse) by firestorm998
I live for the world, I die for my country. I live for my country, I die for freedom. I live for love, I die for romance. I live for my family, I die for one. I live for evil, I die for God. I live for parties, I die for partays. I live for the night, I die for the day. I live for the moon, I die for the sun. I live for the cold, I die for the heat.

Up the ladder: Mourning Sickness
Down the ladder: Thespian

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8731
Posted: December 26, 2003 10:01 AM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2003 10:01 AM PST
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[6] richa @ 81.178.240.218 | 27-Dec-03/3:39 PM | Reply
You could at least have made an effort.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 27-Dec-03/9:58 PM | Reply
Certainly a nice idea - but the execution... Despite Richa's [everpresent] sour tone, I agree with him.
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