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Do You Love Me Too (Ode) by DustyStar
Some guys think sex is equal to love, but how do you know if it's for real the best way to know is in a hug. It makes your heart beat crazy like a caged up dove. I have had a question on my mind for a very, very, long, long time. But when I look at you I can't think I can't speak, MAN! it makes me feel like such a geek. This is so hard to put in a way, I'd like to be face-to-face and say. I need to know how you feel, if only you knew that deep inside, touching you gives me the chills uncontrolable feelings so hard to hide. I need to know now, exactly how you feel when I'm around. Not just perversion and lust, I'm tired of loves stupid game please tell me if you feel the same, cause my heart tells me I Love you, and that's who I trust, It just wont do what I tell it to, So... what does your heart do?

Up the ladder: believing
Down the ladder: Teen Machine

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8742
Posted: June 16, 2004 4:33 PM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2004 4:33 PM PDT
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[10] jessicasgurl @ 24.118.251.83 | 17-Jun-04/10:27 AM | Reply
thats a good one jess love ya Shay
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 17-Jun-04/11:15 AM | Reply
Help me I'm trapped in this comments box.
[4] god'swife @ 4.233.113.83 | 22-Jun-04/12:44 PM | Reply
Let's see, if some guy sent me this poem, I would think it he was sweet but a simpleton. I don't know if that's a compliment or not.
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