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Live for Die for (Free verse) by firestorm998

I live for the world, I die for my country. I live for my country, I die for freedom. I live for love, I die for romance. I live for my family, I die for one. I live for evil, I die for God. I live for parties, I die for partays. I live for the night, I die for the day. I live for the moon, I die for the sun. I live for the cold, I die for the heat.

Shuushin 27-Dec-03/9:58 PM
Certainly a nice idea - but the execution... Despite Richa's [everpresent] sour tone, I agree with him.




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