Re: Sprinklers by KarmicTwiggy	13-Nov-02/11:30 PM
going to carolina in my mind. forever. 8.
Re: a comment on No recalculations needed by Bachus	13-Nov-02/12:55 PM
there. thanks. everyones points have been made.
Re: a comment on Handy Smurf by Bachus	13-Nov-02/12:44 PM
only if i can wear it with you. and speak chinese with my left hand. how are you these days?
Re: a comment on Gloria's stairwell circles up & down by Bachus	11-Nov-02/4:00 PM
on re-reading your comment. i unfortunately and thoroughly saddened must agree. oh..well. there's always barry manilow and a good porte' ow grof.
Re: Goodbye by Nicholas Jones	11-Nov-02/3:45 PM
and the brethren say satasfactory. i don't care for you as a human being, because your not yet, but i will buy you a beer after work one day..so here. i enjoyed reading it on all the levels that count in the attic across the street from you...here i'll flash my light twice to proof it.2
Re: echoes by brazen	11-Nov-02/3:31 PM
great last line, but second stanza last line "horizon" and or hori-zen which could be better, but since you don't have any other hyphens going on any where else it wouldn't look that good i guess...interesting notion though...just forget everything i said..i'm stoned and squandering my time unwisely again...has anyone seen a better manager or agent floating around here..i need a new one. bad.
Re: i miss you by bxjay170	11-Nov-02/1:25 PM
the word "holping" does seem to offer a bit of hope so can you holp me holp you holp yourself. you're fired. next.A
Re: i miss you by bxjay170	11-Nov-02/1:21 PM
wtching yo prposely mispll thangs becouse you'ree bored. bores me, and frankly...you should be keel hauled and sent to collect oysters for shillings.i've felt pigeon feed with more texture than this train wreck. have fun on the worst list it's inevitable.
Re: The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY	11-Nov-02/11:16 AM
once the moon made me travel drunk in the wrong direction...i ran out of gas..kicked out both of my headlights..ripped my steering wheel and hood off.then bawled like a baby and blamed my parents for all of it still holding onto my steering wheel as a teddy bear for hours. fucking moon.
Re: Jockey by betty swallox	11-Nov-02/11:03 AM
fine.
Re: A little by The Eskimo King	11-Nov-02/10:50 AM
i think katie that the lad is a them cockneed king of the eskimo which would explain the complete dissappearance of the word..well..."of". another one of the queens blessings besides her borderline inbred gene pool..(also the same reasons why pedigrees are in fact just the opposite) take the bulldog and the persian cat for example they die quite young from breathing complications and hip problems...one could then argue..well the queen is really old and breathes fine. only because she has never done a single physical task of labor ever so there has been less wear and tear on her body.point being...i have no fucking idea.what was i talking about again..ah yeah. queens.3.
Re: Monday by betty swallox	11-Nov-02/10:40 AM
i was never much of a nine to five person...but i get naked and chase cars for orange squash...whatever in fucks sake that vegetable/fruit arrangement might consist of....here i'll trade you my overly exciting life as an international playboy...to dumb it all down..perhaps a switch, my pan pipes... for your shirt.8.
Re: Horse Burgers by flanners	11-Nov-02/10:34 AM
sssssssheeer brilliance. here, have a handjob on me. her name is grasshen. return her to me when you're done...with both shoes. thanks. 10.
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	10-Nov-02/3:37 PM
hey baby! how are you? i don't know why i miss you? we've never met, nor has anyone left? anyway congradulations on the base ment full of merlot...did you see frida yet or punchdrunk love? something tells me that we have a terribly large amount of unusual things in common..important things.. like boobs and merlot..just kidding.anyhow some lame poet is putting the moves on my son's mother currently(one of these self published types that goes around autographing his own book and handing them out to thee overimpressionable)..so i have to go rescue her...my superman haircut justs never lets me rest. this by no means has anything to do with my persistent fascination with you. i was just thinking out loud...talk to you later. luv h.
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	9-Nov-02/3:02 PM
really? i'm glad you got a laugh. you deserve many more, and i'll be the first to admit that you are the keeper of the last tid bits of what remains of my ego? could you give me little more back today i'm feeling talentless and a little down right now. to begin with i have no clue as to why you give a shit, nor why i'm even responding, eviltwin, and on top of that sir evil you're about as dark and intimidatingly accurate as a lame dwarf with a dead eye...you should perhaps..get a pen pal, and open up a line of communication with someone who actually gives a fuck.dickhead.
Re: Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy	8-Nov-02/12:43 PM
lol. this is a riot. here's a ten...for having to carry your laptop all that way. 10.h
Re: a comment on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin	8-Nov-02/12:25 PM
also a splendid flick by 'todd browning'(also was the first director to do dracula and the man who wasn't there with lon channey which is also a great flick))..who saw his friends head ripped off by a pipe truck on the 10 freeway when it was still a dirt road from l.a to santa monica...he used real freaks of course in the film(including the cone heads which constantly shit there pants on set) and the scene where the de-limbed torso is rolling around then goes up onto that table to light a smoke is fucking mind boggling...cheers!
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	7-Nov-02/8:13 PM
congradulations. here's a corvette and a superman lunchbox i got off of ebay. it has a tupperware pringle holder.
Re: Returning by INTRANSIT	7-Nov-02/8:02 PM
line nine "with". third stanza, at the . But (lose that) start the next sentence with the but...failes or fails..guess it doesn't matter...end with "being the torturer that i am. capsized." here's an eight. 8.
Re: a comment on Of the opposition. Zipcode graffitti by Bachus	7-Nov-02/4:21 PM
you can be blunt, i'm not hiding anything or foisting just being creative is all. why? what's wrong with it? do you know something i don't? the other day i went to charity event in san diego. sheer terror. "the latta". the fold. bermuda.