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Limerick № 24620

Jockey

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2002 · 3 comments

A jockey who wants to be a monk got upset when told he had to leave his horse (his beloved pet) I'm a jockey (said with disgrace) how on earth can i race and what about when i want tibet

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3 comments

[7] Bachus 11-Nov-02/11:03 AM Reply
fine.
[2] ciantu 5-Dec-02/2:43 PM Reply
twas stupid
[5] Robert K Foster 15-Jan-03/9:38 AM Reply
a bit wordy--it muddles up the pace.