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Why Is It When I...?

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Sep 2002 · 6 comments

Why Is It When I...? Why is it when I make a wish it never comes true? Why is it when I want someone I never get you? (Certain girl) Why is it when I need a friend no one comes and I feel down? Why is it when I am lonely no one bothers to come around? Why is it when I have to make a decision and I usually run? Why is it when I loose a friend its hard to gang one? Why is it when I am playing a game I'm always chosen last? Why is it when I am at school I work alone in my class? Why is it when I go home I'm told I'm stupid and lazy? Why is it when I think of another "Why Question" it makes me go crazy?

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[n/a] god'swife 18-Sep-02/10:29 PM Reply

I'm curious, what books of poetry do 15 yr olds read these days? Seriously.

[n/a] liljsmith87 › god'swife 19-Sep-02/4:05 PM Reply

is it bad?

[n/a] god'swife › liljsmith87 19-Sep-02/4:22 PM Reply

Yes. Have you read any books of poetry? Which ones?

[n/a] liljsmith87 › god'swife 19-Sep-02/5:33 PM Reply

I usually write what comes to my head right off.....i'd take the time to write a real good one but i never have the time.

[6] royalflesh 18-Sep-02/10:37 PM Reply

Sorry. erased. don't know what got into me... Everyone feels this way sometimes..Don't worry. You'll look back to these times later in your life and appreciate who YOU were. Define yourself and don't let others push you around. Demand RESPECT.

[0] poetandknowit 18-Sep-02/10:50 PM Reply

Please stop writing. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with sugar on top. Is anyone here a HS creative writing teacher? Please, if so, tell me how do you stand going to your job every day?