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Why Is It When I...? (Free verse) by liljsmith87
Why Is It When I...? Why is it when I make a wish it never comes true? Why is it when I want someone I never get you? (Certain girl) Why is it when I need a friend no one comes and I feel down? Why is it when I am lonely no one bothers to come around? Why is it when I have to make a decision and I usually run? Why is it when I loose a friend its hard to gang one? Why is it when I am playing a game I'm always chosen last? Why is it when I am at school I work alone in my class? Why is it when I go home I'm told I'm stupid and lazy? Why is it when I think of another "Why Question" it makes me go crazy?

Up the ladder: love
Down the ladder: Jockey

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 3.75
Overall Rank: 13523
Posted: September 18, 2002 5:32 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 5:32 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.134.108 | 18-Sep-02/10:29 PM | Reply
I'm curious, what books of poetry do 15 yr olds read these days? Seriously.
[n/a] liljsmith87 @ 12.149.225.157 > god'swife | 19-Sep-02/4:05 PM | Reply
is it bad?
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.178.176.197 > liljsmith87 | 19-Sep-02/4:22 PM | Reply
Yes. Have you read any books of poetry? Which ones?
[n/a] liljsmith87 @ 12.149.225.157 > god'swife | 19-Sep-02/5:33 PM | Reply
I usually write what comes to my head right off.....i'd take the time to write a real good one but i never have the time.
[6] royalflesh @ 67.115.84.106 | 18-Sep-02/10:37 PM | Reply
Sorry. erased. don't know what got into me... Everyone feels this way sometimes..Don't worry. You'll look back to these times later in your life and appreciate who YOU were. Define yourself and don't let others push you around. Demand RESPECT.
[0] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.170 | 18-Sep-02/10:50 PM | Reply
Please stop writing. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with sugar on top. Is anyone here a HS creative writing teacher? Please, if so, tell me how do you stand going to your job every day?
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