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Jockey (Limerick) by betty swallox

A jockey who wants to be a monk got upset when told he had to leave his horse (his beloved pet) I'm a jockey (said with disgrace) how on earth can i race and what about when i want tibet

Robert K Foster 15-Jan-03/9:38 AM
a bit wordy--it muddles up the pace.




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