poemranker ::Think by phoenixxx

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Free verse № 52691

Think

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Jun 2003 · 2 comments

I’m left cold and alone When he walks in the room And your smiles fly far When he goes away You ponder the question And I fear the truth Will you risk it all? Love and friends To step into love With the boy from the other side? Will you leave your world For a new nirvana? And while you care not for me Think of the pain that the world can dispense Think of the horror That the heart can create Think of the tempest That emotions can cause But, farewell and good luck In your new game of love As you leave me in my abyss Wondering what I did wrong I guess I just wasn’t enough I guess I just wasn’t enough

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2 comments

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Jun-03/9:34 AM Reply
I guess not. But maybe you can make up for it by writing about your uninteresting emotions in an uninteresting way!!
[3] SupremeDreamer 21-Jun-03/11:32 PM Reply
Pseudo Poetry is what it looks like.. nice and sweet, 99 cents a piece right? -sigh-