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Think (Free verse) by phoenixxx Iâm left cold and alone
When he walks in the room
And your smiles fly far
When he goes away
You ponder the question
And I fear the truth
Will you risk it all?
Love and friends
To step into love
With the boy from the other side?
Will you leave your world
For a new nirvana?
And while you care not for me
Think of the pain that the world can dispense
Think of the horror
That the heart can create
Think of the tempest
That emotions can cause
But, farewell and good luck
In your new game of love
As you leave me in my abyss
Wondering what I did wrong
I guess I just wasnât enough
I guess I just wasnât enough
Up the ladder:
Jockey
Down the ladder:
American Poem
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: June 12, 2003 1:35 PM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2003 1:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.7467568 Overall Rank: 13520 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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14-Jun-03/9:34 AM
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I guess not. But maybe you can make up for it by writing about your uninteresting emotions in an uninteresting way!!
Pseudo Poetry is what it looks like.. nice and sweet, 99 cents a piece right? -sigh-
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