DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Horse Burgers

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2002 · 9 comments

Mist creeps up on me, like a tide of misery, alone, lonely, still as the night makes me feel, the calm of silence... Broken suddenly- Lurch as the car hits the obstruction A train skids off the tracks with a slow metalic twist Ideas

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.14 weighted 5.04 rank 7188 views 133 View voting details →

7 votes so far. Yours would make 8.7 votes so far

9 comments

[5] Dan garcia-Black 11-Nov-02/10:25 AM Reply

Unclear to me if this is a description of your interaction with your muse (Mist & misery). Is this about your writing process?

[10] Bachus 11-Nov-02/10:34 AM Reply

sssssssheeer brilliance. here, have a handjob on me. her name is grasshen. return her to me when you're done...with both shoes. thanks. 10.

[n/a] The Eskimo King › Bachus 12-Nov-02/2:22 AM Reply

You are quite strange, leave this site now!!!

[2] <~> › The Eskimo King 12-Nov-02/6:48 AM Reply

listen, e-king, bachus is our resident debaucher, sort of like a pet that ruins your funiture and rugs and eats off your plate and you let him because you love him the things he does just keep you going...so sit back and enjoy the ride and maybe look around a little before you start telling people who have been here FOR YEARS to leave, k? have a great one!

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › <~> 12-Nov-02/7:25 AM Reply

bachus hasn't been here for years.

[n/a] Christof › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Nov-02/7:45 AM Reply

But he's there, just above you. Can't you see? Or that an empty husk of a bachus?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Christof 12-Nov-02/8:27 AM Reply

No, I mean it's not the case that he's been here for years.

[2] <~> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Nov-02/8:32 AM Reply

my bad. too much cough syrup this morning. hic.

[7] joey 20-Nov-02/4:51 AM Reply

looks like an anthology poem to me......how could you bring back the memories......but allnot that bad, as half caste shows!!! hehe, interesting poem here!!!