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Horse Burgers (Free verse) by flanners Mist creeps up on me,
like a tide of misery,
alone,
lonely, still as the night makes me feel,
the calm of silence...
Broken suddenly-
Lurch as the car hits the obstruction
A train skids off the tracks
with a slow metalic twist
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Posted: November 11, 2002 8:22 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 8:22 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.03842 Overall Rank: 7195 Comments:
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Dan garcia-Black @ 67.118.140.22
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11-Nov-02/10:25 AM
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Unclear to me if this is a description of your interaction with your muse (Mist & misery). Is this about your writing process?
sssssssheeer brilliance. here, have a handjob on me. her name is grasshen. return her to me when you're done...with both shoes. thanks. 10.
You are quite strange, leave this site now!!!
listen, e-king, bachus is our resident debaucher, sort of like a pet that ruins your funiture and rugs and eats off your plate and you let him because you love him the things he does just keep you going...so sit back and enjoy the ride and maybe look around a little before you start telling people who have been here FOR YEARS to leave, k? have a great one!
bachus hasn't been here for years.
But he's there, just above you. Can't you see? Or that an empty husk of a bachus?
No, I mean it's not the case that he's been here for years.
my bad. too much cough syrup this morning. hic.
looks like an anthology poem to me......how could you bring back the memories......but allnot that bad, as half caste shows!!! hehe, interesting poem here!!!
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