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Obsession (Free verse) by susie I used to be obsessed
Obsessed over just you
But I know you were a married man
And did not have a clue
Though I knew you and I could never be
My hart could not forget
And every time I heard your name
My mind would get upset
I think I now got over
Or at least so has my heart
But I'm not sure about my mind
In wich you're still a part
Up the ladder:
Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b
Down the ladder:
Horse Burgers
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Posted: November 6, 2002 8:06 AM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2002 8:06 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.03842 Overall Rank: 7195 Comments:
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anonymous @ 195.173.242.188
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6-Nov-02/9:01 AM
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Great poem, I like the sentence "Though I knew you and I could never be"
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