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Obsession (Free verse) by susie

I used to be obsessed Obsessed over just you But I know you were a married man And did not have a clue Though I knew you and I could never be My hart could not forget And every time I heard your name My mind would get upset I think I now got over Or at least so has my heart But I'm not sure about my mind In wich you're still a part

anonymous 6-Nov-02/9:01 AM
Great poem, I like the sentence "Though I knew you and I could never be"




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