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Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b (Haiku) by cacophony
#2a sugar sweet sixteen olde english on balmy nights the taste of summer #2b approaching thirty the olde english turns my cheek and my fragile guts

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.142857
Weighted score: 5.03842
Overall Rank: 7190
Posted: November 5, 2002 11:44 AM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2002 11:44 AM PST
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[8] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 5-Nov-02/11:46 AM | Reply
i say once you hit 30, you're too old to drink that shit and should move on to scotch. sounds like your stomach's telling you the same thing. nice. 8
[4] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.88 > UnityMitford | 5-Nov-02/12:23 PM | Reply
You ought to start on Scotch and stick to it.
[7] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.80 | 12-Jun-03/5:18 AM | Reply
isn't Olde English a leather treatment or furniture polish?
[n/a] cacophony @ 81.100.251.10 > Robert K Foster | 13-Jun-03/11:43 AM | Reply
ah... now that explains my aching belly and the wierd shine in the bottom of my loo!
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