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Horse Burgers (Free verse) by flanners

Mist creeps up on me, like a tide of misery, alone, lonely, still as the night makes me feel, the calm of silence... Broken suddenly- Lurch as the car hits the obstruction A train skids off the tracks with a slow metalic twist Ideas

joey 20-Nov-02/4:51 AM
looks like an anthology poem to me......how could you bring back the memories......but allnot that bad, as half caste shows!!! hehe, interesting poem here!!!




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