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one word (Free verse) by Blade FUCK
Up the ladder:
Bloody Sonner
Down the ladder:
How my head feels
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.352941
Posted: October 3, 2002 5:27 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 5:27 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.353158 Overall Rank: 13052 Comments:
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Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200
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3-Oct-02/6:49 AM
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Come on, there's not much point, is there?
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Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200
> Nicholas Jones
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3-Oct-02/6:50 AM
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By the way, I'm the only person to vote, and gave it zero, but the average is 4.76. Have the laws of mathematics been suspended?
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
> Nicholas Jones
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3-Oct-02/7:34 AM
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Yeah I don't understand that. There's some fiendish weighting system that gets applied to new poems that i think only nentwined understands.
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.129
> Christof
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3-Oct-02/7:57 AM
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You are obsessed with absolutes. It is a mathematical conundrum. Everything begins halfway. We all begin at five, so we theoretically we need 25 zeros without any other number to bop it up to have the resolution of nothing.
Yup. That's only one word all right.
ABSOLUTELY POINTLESS!!!!
It was worth it!
There is only one mark you can give this
SWEET...Very Impressed 10 for you...lmao 10 for using atleast 1% of ur brain
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Daer God, a new poet laureate surley! Well done.
Oh dear
Count Caddington of puddilia will have his revenge, good sir...and you will once again kiss the crevase that bore your haggard demon frame. burp.
I think the most appropriate statement I could offer would be that this is by far your finest submission to date, and in all likelihood, will remain thus. 1.
Yes
Oh dear...and I used to think sooooo highly of you Blade.
Point.........
A one word rebuttal: "YOU."
How long did this take to write? And exactly what are you shooting for? Reaction? Abstraction? Realism? Surrealism? Warholism? Gymnasium? Is this the individual proletariats response to oppression in the work place? A response to a bar rejection? A failing grade? What do you mean. Do you want to start a revolution? Or are you just a young boy with nothing better to do and loads suburban angst?
wow...you're talented!L
hackneyed
This does not in any qualify as a free verse!!! How can you insult the laws of poetry and call this a free verse?! Nicompoop! Imbecile! Twerp! Dweeb!
Simple...he opens his mouth and crap spews everywhere
HMMM, the poem has such potential, the first stanza is filled with anger and passion but as the poem draws to a final conclusion the overal objective is somehwta lost between the C and the K...close but only a 9!
inguinal.
You rule, dude. 0
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