You are obsessed with absolutes. It is a mathematical conundrum. Everything begins halfway. We all begin at five, so we theoretically we need 25 zeros without any other number to bop it up to have the resolution of nothing.
I think the most appropriate statement I could offer would be that this is by far your finest submission to date, and in all likelihood, will remain thus. 1.
How long did this take to write? And exactly what are you shooting for? Reaction? Abstraction? Realism? Surrealism? Warholism? Gymnasium? Is this the individual proletariats response to oppression in the work place? A response to a bar rejection? A failing grade? What do you mean. Do you want to start a revolution? Or are you just a young boy with nothing better to do and loads suburban angst?
HMMM, the poem has such potential, the first stanza is filled with anger and passion but as the poem draws to a final conclusion the overal objective is somehwta lost between the C and the K...close but only a 9!
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