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one word (Free verse) by Blade

FUCK

deep-as-a-puddle 23-Dec-02/1:45 PM
HMMM, the poem has such potential, the first stanza is filled with anger and passion but as the poem draws to a final conclusion the overal objective is somehwta lost between the C and the K...close but only a 9!




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