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echoes (Free verse) by brazen
an echo told me where to go
it took me beyond all i know
where i saw you sitting there
shovel in hand and ground bare
digging a grave below a dome
surely the foundation for our home.
dead ends are never completly that
only so if you've gone flat
out of air and sinking fast
strongest patch could never last
long enough to save tomorrow
went to yesterday to borrow
the memories of the ride
so i may drive to a horizen wide.
now is not the time to test me
still a bit winded from my flee
so long since i've traveled alone
silence has never been a lovely tone
until your drums bust from chaos
now i'm surviving beyond us
i have gained more without
using new knowledge on route
to the familar town i see up ahead
medication taken from my empty bed.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.714286
Weighted score: 4.9231596
Overall Rank: 9394
Posted: November 11, 2002 2:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 2:53 PM PST
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