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www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf (Free verse) by darby pyn A calm serene landscape ominous in it's
perfection. undecided with you're perception
it feels too surreal. you wander further into
the dream disregarding you're reservations.
at the point of calm when you except the
description a flash! of fear too quick
to react pulls you from you're concentration
into a nightmare.
Up the ladder:
Drunken note #3
Down the ladder:
echoes
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Posted: October 22, 2002 7:54 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2002 6:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9231596 Overall Rank: 9393 Comments:
would you belive, i commented on this without going there earlier. i just went. HAAAAAAAAAA.SHIT FUCK SHIT, YOU ARE FUCKING WILD HA HA HA. that was totally fucking freaky shit..ha ha ha wow. shit jesus..i was like sitting here with insomnia, wondring how i'll feel with no sleep in twoi days at my mervyns audition tomorrow, and i was like well lets see what darbys been up to, and than i checked out the site, and spilled beer all over my face and lap, and my hearts going a hundred fucking miles an hour..uncool..really fucking uncool. have a ten.??
Not the beer.
well Im off to the bar. Ill have a couple of shots for you. thanks 195 view(s)
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something to exploit our medium. plus Halloween is near.