poemranker ::www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf by darby pyn

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Free verse № 22024

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Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Oct 2002 · Edited 23 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

A calm serene landscape ominous in it's perfection. undecided with you're perception it feels too surreal. you wander further into the dream disregarding you're reservations. at the point of calm when you except the description a flash! of fear too quick to react pulls you from you're concentration into a nightmare.

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4 comments

[7] horus8 22-Oct-02/8:03 PM Reply
an den ?you see punch drunk love & say...wow. dude farout...no frogs, but still.okay..oscar worthy for best picture at least. oh the poem..i think. 7.
[n/a] darby pyn › horus8 22-Oct-02/8:20 PM Reply
Thank you horus. I had this ideal of an " interactive poem".
something to exploit our medium. plus Halloween is near.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 3-Jan-03/3:21 AM Reply
would you belive, i commented on this without going there earlier. i just went. HAAAAAAAAAA.SHIT FUCK SHIT, YOU ARE FUCKING WILD HA HA HA. that was totally fucking freaky shit..ha ha ha wow. shit jesus..i was like sitting here with insomnia, wondring how i'll feel with no sleep in twoi days at my mervyns audition tomorrow, and i was like well lets see what darbys been up to, and than i checked out the site, and spilled beer all over my face and lap, and my hearts going a hundred fucking miles an hour..uncool..really fucking uncool. have a ten.??
[n/a] darby pyn › <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Jan-03/12:23 AM Reply
Not the beer.
well Im off to the bar. Ill have a couple of shots for you.
thanks