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Drunken note #3 (Free verse) by blackball black faded leaking
you know you can't hold
let it loose
please accept my paint
although scared
wait...
place fake knowledge
bleak
black faded knowing
without
feign hypocrisy
hold nothing
without
run
black
mated with guilt
hold yourself back
from both sides
(scream)
Up the ladder:
The Freezer
Down the ladder:
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.714286
Posted: October 6, 2002 10:40 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2002 10:40 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9231596 Overall Rank: 9387 Comments:
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Jigg @ 66.119.34.39
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6-Oct-02/5:33 PM
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*speechless* I just don't get it, is this site not governed in any sorta way, mean or fashion!? Why am I being forced to read this, this bile. Y'see what I did there?...huh d'you see it, I took ya down one road just for ya to be dragged back and took down the real road. I tell ya kid you'll go far, it's another 10 that'll do me, Tommy.
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