poemranker ::Drunken note #3 by blackball

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Free verse № 18943

Drunken note #3

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

black faded leaking you know you can't hold let it loose please accept my paint although scared wait... place fake knowledge bleak black faded knowing without feign hypocrisy hold nothing without run black mated with guilt hold yourself back from both sides (scream)

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[10] Jigg 6-Oct-02/5:33 PM Reply
*speechless* I just don't get it, is this site not governed in any sorta way, mean or fashion!? Why am I being forced to read this, this bile. Y'see what I did there?...huh d'you see it, I took ya down one road just for ya to be dragged back and took down the real road. I tell ya kid you'll go far, it's another 10 that'll do me, Tommy.