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www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf (Free verse) by darby pyn

A calm serene landscape ominous in it's perfection. undecided with you're perception it feels too surreal. you wander further into the dream disregarding you're reservations. at the point of calm when you except the description a flash! of fear too quick to react pulls you from you're concentration into a nightmare.

darby pyn 5-Jan-03/12:23 AM
Not the beer.
well Im off to the bar. Ill have a couple of shots for you.
thanks




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