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www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf (Free verse) by darby pyn

A calm serene landscape ominous in it's perfection. undecided with you're perception it feels too surreal. you wander further into the dream disregarding you're reservations. at the point of calm when you except the description a flash! of fear too quick to react pulls you from you're concentration into a nightmare.

horus8 22-Oct-02/8:03 PM
an den ?you see punch drunk love & say...wow. dude farout...no frogs, but still.okay..oscar worthy for best picture at least. oh the poem..i think. 7.




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