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www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf (Free verse) by darby pyn

A calm serene landscape ominous in it's perfection. undecided with you're perception it feels too surreal. you wander further into the dream disregarding you're reservations. at the point of calm when you except the description a flash! of fear too quick to react pulls you from you're concentration into a nightmare.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 3-Jan-03/3:21 AM
would you belive, i commented on this without going there earlier. i just went. HAAAAAAAAAA.SHIT FUCK SHIT, YOU ARE FUCKING WILD HA HA HA. that was totally fucking freaky shit..ha ha ha wow. shit jesus..i was like sitting here with insomnia, wondring how i'll feel with no sleep in twoi days at my mervyns audition tomorrow, and i was like well lets see what darbys been up to, and than i checked out the site, and spilled beer all over my face and lap, and my hearts going a hundred fucking miles an hour..uncool..really fucking uncool. have a ten.??




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