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Of the opposition. Zipcode graffitti (Free verse) by Bachus
The PAINTED one to the shout of which it is of that it is of the later part with the pile of the coal of the firewood of the height of the skin in my meat still has received can polish nao controlled and undernourished too Man did not take through my low point of the level of the tonality, where as hour I trust the defective outside like latta of the gram, that I must be developed that the Sprachenpuante of emorraggia of the edge was average of the meeting of the dog much dry earth I the person in charge of yearses of nine, of that the memory on the other hand I of the inoperative parrots and that breakings, of that it observes of the cat the density is not classified, of that relati you reun of the red ones of the eyes therefore as low it must controparti satisfied, this everything of the mine due to mine of the art in this on the other hand that they stupid them, arrested turned, of that it fits of dispendio of the parents alongside to observe mien ARRESTING the PAINTED one that you create of them vibe almost and nothing, only, which it the other way around gives to shutdowns $$R-come.sopra the this avarice I, that I am burned totally I am I content, I know for compire with three arrows, that command baton of the mine, like you in the edition its appropriate faith or this total of latta of the place of the necessity bends of the poison, of, the origin of this enemy of opposition.

Up the ladder: Beauty vs the beast
Down the ladder: Mistaken Paradise

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.888889
Weighted score: 4.9444447
Overall Rank: 9011
Posted: November 6, 2002 5:38 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2002 5:38 PM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 7-Nov-02/12:25 PM | Reply
i'm calling you on this one. fess up. NOW-uh!!!
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > <~> | 7-Nov-02/12:49 PM | Reply
what ever do you mean? darling.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Bachus | 7-Nov-02/1:29 PM | Reply
you are either foisting or hiding. which will it be?
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > <~> | 7-Nov-02/4:21 PM | Reply
you can be blunt, i'm not hiding anything or foisting just being creative is all. why? what's wrong with it? do you know something i don't? the other day i went to charity event in san diego. sheer terror. "the latta". the fold. bermuda.
[8] David @ 209.178.177.71 | 10-Dec-02/8:58 AM | Reply
e.e. cummings meets the Reverend Jesse, ahhh I forgot his last name.
[8] David @ 209.178.177.71 > David | 10-Dec-02/9:07 AM | Reply
Jackson, that's it, the Reverend Jesse Jackson.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > David | 10-Dec-02/11:17 AM | Reply
fascinating...can you tell me what's in my other hand. perhaps some malcolm x, and whitman? nay nay..it is only a crow feathered foot, and a box of mr. bubbles.
[n/a] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167 | 19-Jan-03/9:46 PM | Reply
Okay, I read this twice, and I don't really get it...but then again when you use phrases such as Sprachenpuante of emorraggia....I have to now go and look it up...damn...this is turning out to be way too educational....when you were writing this did you see yourself as actually rhyming out loud? Yes, Eminem meets Al Sharp. Intresting, indeed...I shall read it again tomorrow. Maybe a few hours of sleep would give me more brain power.and then I'll vote..controparti?
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