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Mistaken Paradise (Free verse) by DJCARTER
I stand with no walls or boundaries in my way
My own personal euphoria, I have created to stay
Foundations of dreams, made within my heart
No man can take away, nor will I ever depart
Memories of the past, which I've held within my soul
Things I have loves, truly cherished, but never told
An escape to a place, where I can love, laugh, and play
A friendly reminder that my mind can still take me away
I've forgotten mistakes made, and promises I've broken
No ones here to judge me, until my eyes open
For every hope, dream, and fantasy are all fake
Life's true reality, I discover as I awake
There's no distant plac for my spirit to be tamed
It's the one true realization, that I cannot ever change
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.888889
Weighted score: 4.9444447
Overall Rank: 9012
Posted: July 18, 2003 1:05 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2003 1:05 AM PDT
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