poemranker ::i miss you by bxjay170

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i miss you

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

i sit back and reminist when you were here/ now all i do is think about how you disapeared/i guess i was'nt good enough for him because it was your father that send you away/now i spend my nights praying i'll get to see you again another day/holping our love through distance does'nt fade/we told each other we will never let anything or anyone come inbetween/people say this can't be love because we are only seven teen/i can't make another female my girl/its like your the only girl for me in this world/now that our gone my hearts dead and burried underground/only your kiss can bring its beeding and sound/baby if i was the king you'll be my queen and my dream is for us to have a son to who i will pass down the crown/i feel so lucky am the guy your heart and love found/

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4 comments

[1] Dark Angle 11-Nov-02/12:25 PM Reply
i hope this is just a test, a test of the bad poem broadcast system
[0] Bachus 11-Nov-02/1:21 PM Reply
wtching yo prposely mispll thangs becouse you'ree bored. bores me, and frankly...you should be keel hauled and sent to collect oysters for shillings.i've felt pigeon feed with more texture than this train wreck. have fun on the worst list it's inevitable.
[0] Bachus 11-Nov-02/1:25 PM Reply
the word "holping" does seem to offer a bit of hope so can you holp me holp you holp yourself. you're fired. next.A
[0] brazen 12-Nov-02/4:55 AM Reply
i can't remember, personally at least, the last time my hearts was beeding. ah, memories.