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Monday (Free verse) by betty swallox
It's Monday at work and i am getting shirty someone's spilt coffee on my qwerty keyboard i'm bored well thanks a bunch it's now 1pm and time for lunch Sandwich, teacake, orange squash not the most desirable nosh back home on the train at 5 30 it was monday at work and i got shirty

Up the ladder: Morning Glory
Down the ladder: my soul i give

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10338
Posted: November 11, 2002 6:07 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 6:07 AM PST
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[7] Dan garcia-Black @ 67.118.140.22 | 11-Nov-02/10:27 AM | Reply
I think I work there, too.
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Nov-02/10:40 AM | Reply
i was never much of a nine to five person...but i get naked and chase cars for orange squash...whatever in fucks sake that vegetable/fruit arrangement might consist of....here i'll trade you my overly exciting life as an international playboy...to dumb it all down..perhaps a switch, my pan pipes... for your shirt.8.
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 5-Feb-04/9:06 PM | Reply
what is this shirty you speak of?
[n/a] zodiac @ 67.240.192.193 > Shuushin | 5-Feb-04/9:11 PM | Reply
Shuushin, stop hitting random. These posts are two years old. Their posters have long since left the site.
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > zodiac | 6-Feb-04/3:47 AM | Reply
I'm not hitting random you presumptious ass - I'm doing what is expected to be done; when I log onto the site I am presented with a poem and I vote.

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How 'bout you sit back and watch the pretty lights for a while?

;o)
[n/a] zodiac @ 67.240.192.242 > Shuushin | 6-Feb-04/5:24 AM | Reply
Presumptuous ass?
[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 > zodiac | 6-Feb-04/6:48 AM | Reply
(my attempt at humor - no offense meant; I was attempting to be ass-like and shooting for irony).
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