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my soul i give (Other) by roxy
Here I sit, all alone no one to talk to, my tears unknown. As I lie I cry me to sleep, I pray to the Heavens my soul to keep. I hope its the right decision I wish it no mistake, I don't mean to hurt anyone but my heart can no longer ache. The pain hurt too much I couldn't bear it no longer, This wouldn't have happened if I'd been a bit stronger. If i had some support it would have been different, but there was no one around to even glimpse at the hint. But now it's my choice it's the last one I'll make, for when I got to bed tonight tomorrow won't wake. I'm sorry I hurt you I love you, I do, but no one understood me nobody knew. So here's my decision i don't want to live, as I lie here and die to the heaven's, my soul I give.

Up the ladder: Monday
Down the ladder: Marching Orders

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10339
Posted: November 27, 2002 7:02 PM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 7:02 PM PST
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[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Nov-02/7:38 PM | Reply
no, STOP!...here's your blow dryer back...don't do it. try a nive relaxing bath while you dry your hair.n
[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 28-Nov-02/1:44 AM | Reply
so/so it needs identifying as a poem or lyric, try it as a lyric and wrench the heart more, as it stands its mediocre, could be good though, play with it (the poem) that is
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