| Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
2-Oct-03/1:11 PM |
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| Re: angst by nentwined |
2-Oct-03/1:05 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
2-Oct-03/11:56 AM |
With a John Deer attachment for mowing down best buds?
Yaaaaaawn. Oh not another drive by?!
You should add a note that reads; "I want you all to know that I thought long and hard about what I was going to say in this poem and not having any real ability to communicate without my penis in my hand, I had to think up some over played excuse of sentiment in the hopes that someone might like my po-ems." while holding your little wee wee so you don't wet yourself from the excitement of it all.
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| Re: a comment on The Fucktory by horus8 |
2-Oct-03/11:42 AM |
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what's with the multiple user names? - Yes I see fear distributed on a regular basis. In media. If you have pimples, you wont get laid, you're a loser if you aren't a high bad jock with a big dick, there's nothing but angry gun slinging black men in the news, be afraid, we're about to be attacked by third world terrorists with unlimited supplies of nuclear nothings, BE AFRAID so George Bush can protect you, BE AFRAID so you can buy something to protect yourself. BUY BUY BUY to quence your FEAR...afraid of not being kewl? Well, just buy a nice new car and you'll feel better? Afraid someone will steal your car? Well, just buy an alarm, a gun, and a dog to protect yourself? Not afraid enough, not protected enough? Just watch the news...
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| Re: The Fucktory by horus8 |
2-Oct-03/10:52 AM |
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very creative and clear. Though I'm always against racism and biggotry, I admit appreciating your honesty for fear of "jews and negroids." As is common practice where fear is so freely distributed.
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| Re: Desire by revy13 |
1-Oct-03/4:04 PM |
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suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
1-Oct-03/3:37 PM |
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No, if you would have read my paragraph CORRECTLY fuck hole, you would see that I don't CARE about you liking or disliking my poetry. What I CARE about is your remarks. I value peoples comments for the sake of improvement, but after reading some of your so-called poetry, I realized that there is no improvement in your tired ass ghetto complaints. Same song, different drum, beating everyday in some tired old slum. yadda yadda yadda.
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| Re: Untitled by revy13 |
1-Oct-03/9:15 AM |
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hmmmm not much to say on this one. I like it.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
1-Oct-03/9:04 AM |
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Very funny...smart ass. And I say that lovingly. :-)
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
30-Sep-03/3:44 PM |
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Thanks Joe. It's nice to know that some of us are man enough to admit when we're wrong and move on.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
30-Sep-03/9:26 AM |
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...yeah and I notice my run on sentences for all you anal English purists...there's no edit button on the comments. So phtttttt!
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
30-Sep-03/9:23 AM |
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No, I don't care if you like it or not, but you always manage some trite remark about everything, which I don't think is necessary. It seems that a lot of the regulars on this site are pretty freaking stuck on themselves or maybe you're all just totally insecure in your lives and this site is the only place where you can take out your arrogant frustrations on people, either way, it's unbecoming of intelligent people, if you ask me.Why don't you try offering suggestions of improvement if you see room for some? If you're such an expert.
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| Re: Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/5:03 PM |
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"last year, my best bud was mown down," were they driving by on a John Dear?
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| Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/5:02 PM |
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wow, what a freaking literary genious you are.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
29-Sep-03/5:01 PM |
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as your comments have revolutionised the concept of an asshole. It's funny, but you manage to read every one.
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| Re: War Grave by Caducus |
29-Sep-03/11:15 AM |
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| Re: Love doggerel by thavimatola |
29-Sep-03/11:13 AM |
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I don't really get it either, but I like the reference to the drunkard working at the nuclear plant.
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| Re: OM by SupremeDreamer |
29-Sep-03/11:08 AM |
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Interesting piece. What's the Poemwanker award?
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| Re: Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~> |
26-Sep-03/1:49 PM |
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well, I alt+f4 it, but not before saying it's very cute.
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| Re: Wasted Words by ho_hum |
26-Sep-03/1:47 PM |
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pretty good. nice and simple.
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