Re: 10-72 by dragonfly	18-Nov-03/10:13 AM
Slap my ass and call me sally, this poem rocks!
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Dec-03/12:51 PM
I wish i lived in your world. So fluffy and fuzzy. hehe. I like the structure and flow of this one.
Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger	2-Dec-03/3:05 PM
I'm not sure what's more interesting, the flow, structure, depth, simplicity, or the votes and comments. hehe. Good piece.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Dec-03/3:40 PM
too long for my ADD sufferin ass...but I like the first few lines. ;-)
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	2-Dec-03/3:43 PM
SCHWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! I LOVE this poem. The flow, the vocab, the forward thrusting cadence. 10!
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Dec-03/9:42 AM
oh boo hoo, everyone is picking on me, oh boo hoo. I'm so hurt. HA HA. Dickcheese.
Re: Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88	3-Dec-03/11:03 AM
If you took out some of the excessive -so's- it would be so much better. ;-)
Re: The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker	3-Dec-03/11:06 AM
MJ IS INNOCENT!
Re: How Many Miles? by miraclemaker	3-Dec-03/11:08 AM
hmm, interesting.
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	3-Dec-03/11:10 AM
It's ok. I don't know...I just don't like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Dec-03/12:08 PM
beautiful. I like your style.
Re: Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Dec-03/2:07 PM
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Dec-03/2:31 PM
eh
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-03/10:44 AM
APPLAUSE CHRYSTAL...way to dig. I knew you had it in you! I love this one. :-)
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-03/10:47 AM
eh...seems a bit bland. I like your username though.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-03/10:48 AM
my sausage is perfect.
Re: Being H.U.M.A.N. by SatanicSuperman	4-Dec-03/1:58 PM
*breath Other than that, I like it. The rhym is a little choppy, but I think you could smooth it out pretty easily.
Re: Hey, Zeus has disco Balls by Shardik	4-Dec-03/3:48 PM
fun
Re: All Alone In A Selfish Moment by ARTIE	8-Dec-03/10:25 AM
weak
Re: saltwater bath by J.B. Manning	27-Apr-04/8:17 PM
The absense of sorrow fills my mind...meaning that sorrow is not present. I dunno, I worded it that way with the intention of suggesting that sorrow was there, trying to invade my thoughts, but I wouldn't let it.