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All Alone In A Selfish Moment (Other) by ARTIE
Naked on favorite perch you sit trying to give yourself a fit, plying with your frenzied mit slapping sounds from there emit. Feeling rapture from your clit, no one else to benefit.

Up the ladder: Sex Object
Down the ladder: I care 4 you

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9365
Posted: October 24, 2003 2:27 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2003 2:27 PM PDT
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[4] Stephen Robins @ 195.92.198.74 | 24-Oct-03/3:01 PM | Reply
Quite good like getting caught fucking your sister's mouth -10-
[n/a] ARTIE @ 66.68.146.139 > Stephen Robins | 24-Oct-03/3:12 PM | Reply
Crude, my dear 'oet. Throat fucking is a pleasure, incest with MY sister is unthinkable.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96 | 30-Oct-03/2:30 AM | Reply
Dandy.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 8-Dec-03/10:25 AM | Reply
weak
[n/a] ARTIE @ 66.68.146.139 > J.B. Manning | 8-Dec-03/10:34 AM | Reply
Thanks, I appreciate and can deal with constructive criticism. It's the mindless shit that gets in the way.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > ARTIE | 8-Dec-03/2:02 PM | Reply
Agreed, but I think you jumped to the conclusion that I was the one who started all that with Horus08, when it is he who has a fascination with starting shit with me. Also, there is a difference between criticism and plainly rude bullshit. I don't tolerate the later and strike back when ever it's presented.
[n/a] ARTIE @ 66.68.146.139 > J.B. Manning | 8-Dec-03/3:48 PM | Reply
No sir. I never mentioned Horus8 in that response to which you speak. My interjection: I thought the heckling had gone on quite enough. It was like two siblings caught up in a "he said - she said" blaming game that got them both sent to bed without dinner. You do have a tendency to defend yourself at every comment made - good or bad, and yes, I have noticed those that give you regular grief. Chill pills are a good thing. Learn to let go. Come up for air once in a while and breathe deeply. Stress kills.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > ARTIE | 8-Dec-03/4:55 PM | Reply
agreed. Thanks.
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