Pimple № 68784

such a horrible thing to waste

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Oct 2003 · Edited 19 Nov 2003 · 6 comments

Us seems to be such a good thing I don't want to loose either part of it Yet sitting here at night It's the only thing that can cross my mind I sit here begging heaven not to let it be And still I haven't heard from you It really scares me I want to just touch the smile on your lips One last time before you leave There are too many things left to be said Too many things we have yet to do Don't let it end tonight, don't end it for ever Us seems to be such a good thing I don't want to loose either part of it jg

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6 comments

[7] horus8 6-Oct-03/1:31 AM Reply

Interesting.

[n/a] Freethinker1602 6-Oct-03/2:04 AM Reply

thank god.

[7] horus8 › Freethinker1602 6-Oct-03/3:44 AM Reply

Close, but more south.

[7] Shuushin 6-Oct-03/7:53 AM Reply

A contemplation on suicide with a nice twist to it. This touching the lips of a lover must be a universal thing; such a nice image.

And I think the refrain works really well.

[n/a] richa 6-Oct-03/10:59 AM Reply

I think a pimple should be unsubtle, but still express some kind of emotion.

Flow is good, kind of like conversation

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › richa 12-Oct-03/12:39 PM Reply

that's becuase I was talking to myself when I wrote it.