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such a horrible thing to waste (Pimple) by Freethinker1602 Us seems to be such a good thing
I don't want to loose either part of it
Yet sitting here at night
It's the only thing that can cross my mind
I sit here begging heaven not to let it be
And still I haven't heard from you
It really scares me
I want to just touch the smile on your lips
One last time before you leave
There are too many things left to be said
Too many things we have yet to do
Don't let it end tonight, don't end it for ever
Us seems to be such a good thing
I don't want to loose either part of it
jg
Up the ladder:
Involunarily yours,
Down the ladder:
Sounds
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Posted: October 6, 2003 1:28 AM PDT; Last modified: November 19, 2003 7:22 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9284782 Overall Rank: 9343 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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6-Oct-03/1:31 AM
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Interesting.
thank god.
Close, but more south.
A contemplation on suicide with a nice twist to it. This touching the lips of a lover must be a universal thing; such a nice image.
And I think the refrain works really well.
I think a pimple should be unsubtle, but still express some kind of emotion.
Flow is good, kind of like conversation
that's becuase I was talking to myself when I wrote it.
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