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Devilution (Villanelle) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
I'm in charge of noise pollution. Highfelutin' with a nasal stare Welcome to the Devilution. On the sides of my chaps? "Evilution". See motherfuckers? I just don't care. Cuz, I'm in charge of air pollution. The Surgeon General sees no solution. As the Church choir sings "No fair". Welcome to the Devilution. When Dear Darwin said "Evolution"? I spun around with a smile & said "Where" (LOL) Cuz, I'm in charge of water pollution. Like a radioactive yeast, I keep reproducing With my Billy Idol lips & Gene Wilder hair Welcome to the Devilution. The 666 layers of the Abyss? Mild in comparison to the depths of this hole and its hot scare I'm in charge of the new pollution. Welcome to the Devilution.

Down the ladder: Wha wha guitar

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3
Weighted score: 5.15
Overall Rank: 5164
Posted: December 3, 2003 1:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2003 1:31 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 | 3-Dec-03/1:37 PM | Reply
I much like this - is most excerrent. You pumped this out quickly too, didn't you?

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 > Shuushin | 3-Dec-03/1:53 PM | Reply
Yes sir. Poetry, is my life.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 3-Dec-03/2:07 PM | Reply
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 > J.B. Manning | 3-Dec-03/2:23 PM | Reply
That's nice, because I don't vote or read any of yours period! I just like making you look like an asshole.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 3-Dec-03/3:07 PM | Reply
you like trying...
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 > J.B. Manning | 3-Dec-03/3:12 PM | Reply
If I tried you'd know it. But you have a long way to go turdpole. So I'll wait to read your work say, another five years.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Bachus | 3-Dec-03/3:29 PM | Reply
haha, yeah right chump. You'll see. The very next poem I write, you'll be there, like you have been on everything else I've written. Sucken my dick, cuz you can't get enough and now you're just tryin to cover your tracks. Weak.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 > J.B. Manning | 3-Dec-03/4:32 PM | Reply
It's actually quite easy since you do 99% of the work.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Bachus | 4-Dec-03/10:41 AM | Reply
you're contradicting yourself, fuckhole. That and you're lying because you vote on almost all my my entries and you read everyone, taking time, in between slurps, to comment on them all. You can't deny how in love you are with me. The real truth is, that I don't read hardly any of your shit works. Don't believe me, check our histories and we'll see who's on who's nuts, wont we. Don't worry though, I'll have more soon for you to read and later lie about. Night night sweat pea.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 3-Dec-03/3:08 PM | Reply
and don't lie, you read every word and can't help resiting it because you love my work so much...and my dick. If you didn't read any of it, how would you know what they are about and what words I use? Uh huh, that's what I thought.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 > J.B. Manning | 3-Dec-03/4:21 PM | Reply
You mean from your latest poem? Command copy, command paste, and good guessing.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Bachus | 4-Dec-03/10:38 AM | Reply
you are such my bitch.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > J.B. Manning | 4-Dec-03/3:35 PM | Reply
If you say captain pecker checker.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Shardik | 4-Dec-03/3:46 PM | Reply
haha. cute. Check your pecker please. (_O_) <-- you smiling.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > J.B. Manning | 4-Dec-03/6:20 PM | Reply
Actually, its (_8_), thankyou.
[5] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Shardik | 4-Dec-03/10:05 PM | Reply
Double Decker! You can take two at a time, wahoo.
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