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She Cries (Free verse) by holden_caulfield
The guarded walls crumbled.
Stars dripped from the sky
Leaving me black
and empty.
Wake and talk, transcribe, tell the terrible tale.
Cold and
desolate rain of stars,
A storm of pain in a crystal dream.
Take me away
from this place, she said.
This mud veined blood stained place.
Trembling fear in the garden,
Tinged with suppressed desires.
If we do
leap forward the past will follow.
To remain, however, is a victory for
the, "what has been".
The future ship will sail silently in the morning
mists,
Fall gently upon us like a snowflake on a winter branch,
Naked
and brittle but always prepared.
This evening has made me stronger,
My
insight has grown and blossomed.
When this winter ends we will dance
among
The streams of gentle warming sun.
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Weighted score: 5.272636
Overall Rank: 3804
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST
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