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10-72 (Free verse) by dragonfly I'll threaten to shoot him
with the gun we hide in the fireplace
just to see the look on his face
but he knows that I love him
He'll threaten to cut off my manhood
to make sure that his point
is clearly understood
but I know he loves me
I'll hate him today but love him the next
This is the way we've learned to coexist
He'll grab me by the wrist
and threaten to push me down the stairs
But I know, in his own way,
he's letting me know he cares
Up the ladder:
I sat beside the night
Down the ladder:
Won't Be Dreaming (co-writer John K)
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Posted: November 17, 2003 10:46 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2003 10:46 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.8452444 Overall Rank: 1591 Comments:
a lovely codependent ditty.
the only nit I can knit is that I'd like to see a better word than just gun, and cut off is screaming to be replaced. -8-
Slap my ass and call me sally, this poem rocks!
lol glad ya think so...i dont = ]
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Just to show that i care
But if i give into insanity a 0
Just would be enough just about here:o)
Dragon of the fly
i wud not lie
Form'r not the later
is what ill give here
:o)