poemranker ::10-72 by dragonfly

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Free verse № 75868

10-72

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

I'll threaten to shoot him with the gun we hide in the fireplace just to see the look on his face but he knows that I love him He'll threaten to cut off my manhood to make sure that his point is clearly understood but I know he loves me I'll hate him today but love him the next This is the way we've learned to coexist He'll grab me by the wrist and threaten to push me down the stairs But I know, in his own way, he's letting me know he cares

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4 comments

[10] ShaNoN+960317485 18-Nov-03/6:00 AM Reply
i am giving 2 much fucking 10
Just to show that i care
But if i give into insanity a 0
Just would be enough just about here:o)

Dragon of the fly
i wud not lie
Form'r not the later
is what ill give here
:o)
[8] Shuushin 18-Nov-03/8:19 AM Reply
a lovely codependent ditty.

the only nit I can knit is that I'd like to see a better word than just gun, and cut off is screaming to be replaced.

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[9] J.B. Manning 18-Nov-03/10:13 AM Reply
Slap my ass and call me sally, this poem rocks!
[n/a] dragonfly › J.B. Manning 22-Nov-03/11:21 PM Reply
lol glad ya think so...i dont = ]