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20 most recent comments by DreamerSupreme (81-100) and replies

Re: a comment on Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet 20-Sep-03/8:25 PM
Arrogant, yes, though much less than when i was just a tad younger, but:

i dont think im invincible, I've learned that in many painful ways.

-
life is a goddamn 0 warranty zone, you can die by simply
standing on the sidewalk, a perfect choice
for a hit and run, or worse:

live only to
end up in a wheelchair.
-

i know the risks i take, im probly more aware of what those risks are than you do.

your cute cliche "12 and -dude lets try drugs, i never had drugs-utterances are far from factual reality, im not talking out my ass when i say that i have studied heavily about nearly all substances able to alter a mans state of mind.

and dont try to save me, or impart your "sacred" fortune cookie wisedom, if the fools that came before you didnt effect me, then trust me, you will succeed only in looking cuddly and cute, yet still uptight.
Re: Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos 18-Sep-03/7:09 PM
you scare me.. ;/ 8.
Re: a comment on Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 18-Sep-03/6:11 PM
no, i just like to talk, whether i come off as interesting or annoying, boring, stupid, -shrug-.

i just yap. but your listening, and your even talking to me!

what does that say about you?
Re: a comment on Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 18-Sep-03/6:09 PM
I understand that your name is dave.

is that all? do you breathe? fuck? eat? shit? have road rage?

thrilling..
Re: a comment on Lucky Joe Finds a Ring by DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/6:07 PM
oh well, a six is better than 0-5.. (lee, cut the sugar coating and get back to work - BBAH fine, eat me, im jesus.. fuck.)
Re: a comment on Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe 18-Sep-03/6:04 PM
no, if you made me a righteous christian you would have won,
but i have simply decided to produce more "quality" and much less "quantity".

it was in my own best interest. you win an arguement, i improve and gain more skill.. i think im the winner, progress leads to better things.

what do you think? course, my opinion aside:

ok, you win. so what? want a cookie?
Re: a comment on Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe 18-Sep-03/4:39 PM
PS: cant sinners be saved?
Re: a comment on Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe 18-Sep-03/4:38 PM
it was better bullshit than this, and it made some amount of sense, though ofcourse it was fancy babble never-the-less.

The warrior; stupidity,
On the battle field of friends,

cmon now, atleast i didnt get corny.
Re: Lucky Joe Finds a Ring by DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/4:13 PM
short, simple, amusing, and skips all the wonderfull birthday wrapping paper and extra tasteless icing.. more effective no? AYE? lucky joe, sometimes less is more..
Re: Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 18-Sep-03/4:05 PM
bad joke.. DAVE... DAVID DULL, .. DAVE.. SAVE DAVE FROM HIS MUNDANE UNIVERSE - STAB ME DAVE, GET SOME ADRENALIN (its good for your blood, when i drink it, and rid the world of another boring cunt)
Re: Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe 18-Sep-03/3:58 PM
well.. your writing convinces me that you are not in possesion of the ability to handle intoxicants.. my ole poem:

stupid after drugs, means you
were a good actor
before meeting your wife,
who is more charming than you are

:)

lucky.. why do you feel that adding all this extra wrapping paper will make the stupid message look pretty? it looks stupid, makes little sense, and everyone with eyes can see that your layin the bullshit HEAVY.. it stinks.. shovel it. 3
Re: a comment on Strung Out On Sunlight by J.B. Manning 18-Sep-03/12:46 PM
you forgot to mention voices, multi-character thought patterns, and the strange sudden urge to destroy furniture.

good though. i can tell you actually had some experience with sleep dep and meth.
Re: a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote 18-Sep-03/12:35 PM
AH, i see. confusion cured. :)
Re: Mother by Freethinker1602 18-Sep-03/12:31 PM
oh jesus christ.

GROW SOME BALLS. i expressed my hatred to my mother straight to her fucking face.

you actually wrote and posted this here for HER?

couldnt you use a little piece of paper for that so you could hang it on the fridge? fucking imbecile.
Re: At First sight by Nirvana13666 18-Sep-03/12:24 PM
blah blah blah -- your ordinary off the wall bathroom stall scrawl.. *fart* 0
Re: Up for a game? by LuckyJoe 18-Sep-03/12:11 PM
an improvement, you have been struggling for awhile, but this is proof that there is hope. 7.
Re: Scorpion feet lucky rabbit by horus8 18-Sep-03/10:47 AM
And a fat see through scorpion
Poisonous, & barbed kisses
full of babies.

-i had a crystal clear vision of the scorpion, and i like it.. i wish i could paint it and hang it on my wall, but im a poet because i couldnt draw worth a fuck.

btw, whats a ruana?

blessed with nine.
Re: a comment on Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I by JoyLuck 18-Sep-03/10:42 AM
ps: it isnt as brilliant as the first one though.
Re: Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I by JoyLuck 18-Sep-03/10:41 AM
amusing, cute, amazingly beautiful (somehow you pull it off)

heres an 8.
Re: a comment on Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I by JoyLuck 18-Sep-03/10:40 AM
be assured that dark-angel, settle, horus, and a few others will frequently make use of that category, lol.


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