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Unemployment Lining (Free verse) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
Motherfucking bullshit I honestly can't stand it anymore. the world has gone to shitzville on a magic carpet named remodeling. Siding plastic, you can even hose it off. You make me sicker than I make myself. Hows that grab you? you are a sellout that never even got a chance to sell. A hasbeen still waiting for others to say move, or talk that whisper of "getty up" lamby, baah, baah, blind as the dog sheep. Soon, I'll will weave you into a warm hood concealing my third eye chakra and meld in I will be you. I will get you. I will make you pay. Then for kicks... I will Franchise

Up the ladder: 9/2/2003

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Weighted score: 5.7727275
Overall Rank: 1736
Posted: September 18, 2003 6:49 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2003 6:49 PM PDT
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[8] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.166.42 | 18-Sep-03/7:09 PM | Reply
you scare me.. ;/ 8.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > DreamerSupreme | 18-Sep-03/8:31 PM | Reply
Well we have that in common.
[10] deleted user @ 64.63.204.8 | 18-Sep-03/7:24 PM | Reply
You make me want to rip out my bathroom linoleum and lead a band of cockroaches like a six-legged boddhisatva into the heart of urine town.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > deleted user | 18-Sep-03/8:28 PM | Reply
It's coincidentally amazing that you would say such a thing. Since, we did that same thing this year for the $th of July.
[2] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.76 | 19-Sep-03/7:50 AM | Reply
I expect you fashioned all of your own belongings from a collection of sticks and wheat.
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.171.44 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Sep-03/7:55 AM | Reply
I think he built his house with crucifixs and golden twine. (if you look carefully, one of the crucifixs has a mexican hobo freshly nailed to it, some sort of ritual or something, i forget.)
[2] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.76 > Don-Quixote | 19-Sep-03/8:15 AM | Reply
That's one smooth house.
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.171.44 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Sep-03/8:29 AM | Reply
cozy, wonderful place to have a barbeque, i hear that protestant meat is the best, (catholics are a bit bitter)
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Sep-03/2:10 PM | Reply
Whicker and lichens, actually, w/pig tendon fasteners (dried, of course).
[7] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* @ 65.95.30.115 | 9-Feb-05/5:08 PM | Reply
okay
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