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Unemployment Lining

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Sep 2003 · 10 comments

Motherfucking bullshit I honestly can't stand it anymore. the world has gone to shitzville on a magic carpet named remodeling. Siding plastic, you can even hose it off. You make me sicker than I make myself. Hows that grab you? you are a sellout that never even got a chance to sell. A hasbeen still waiting for others to say move, or talk that whisper of "getty up" lamby, baah, baah, blind as the dog sheep. Soon, I'll will weave you into a warm hood concealing my third eye chakra and meld in I will be you. I will get you. I will make you pay. Then for kicks... I will Franchise

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[8] DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/7:09 PM Reply
you scare me.. ;/ 8.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/8:31 PM Reply
Well we have that in common.
[10] deleted user 18-Sep-03/7:24 PM Reply
You make me want to rip out my bathroom linoleum and lead a band of cockroaches like a six-legged boddhisatva into the heart of urine town.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › deleted user 18-Sep-03/8:28 PM Reply
It's coincidentally amazing that you would say such a thing. Since, we did that same thing this year for the $th of July.
[2] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/7:50 AM Reply
I expect you fashioned all of your own belongings from a collection of sticks and wheat.
[n/a] Don-Quixote › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/7:55 AM Reply
I think he built his house with crucifixs and golden twine. (if you look carefully, one of the crucifixs has a mexican hobo freshly nailed to it, some sort of ritual or something, i forget.)
[2] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? › Don-Quixote 19-Sep-03/8:15 AM Reply
That's one smooth house.
[n/a] Don-Quixote › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/8:29 AM Reply
cozy, wonderful place to have a barbeque, i hear that protestant meat is the best, (catholics are a bit bitter)
[n/a] horus8 › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/2:10 PM Reply
Whicker and lichens, actually, w/pig tendon fasteners (dried, of course).
[7] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 9-Feb-05/5:08 PM Reply
okay