poemranker ::Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I by JoyLuck

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Free verse № 65565

Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I

by JoyLuck

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Sep 2003 · Edited 17 Sep 2003 · 5 comments

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5 comments

[10] horus8 17-Sep-03/2:31 PM Reply
Beautiful, GQTip Awarde
[6] nentwined 17-Sep-03/6:10 PM Reply
this should be under 'concrete', no?

do I really have to make an 'ascii art' category?

[[would people use it if I did?]]

la la la.

cute, given its history.
[8] DreamerSupreme › nentwined 18-Sep-03/10:40 AM Reply
be assured that dark-angel, settle, horus, and a few others will frequently make use of that category, lol.
[8] DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/10:41 AM Reply
amusing, cute, amazingly beautiful (somehow you pull it off)

heres an 8.
[8] DreamerSupreme › DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/10:42 AM Reply
ps: it isnt as brilliant as the first one though.