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Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I (Free verse) by JoyLuck JL
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Up the ladder:
Outliving the Alphabet (say goodbye to abecedarian)
Down the ladder:
the wire
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Posted: September 17, 2003 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 1:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4350 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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17-Sep-03/2:31 PM
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Beautiful, GQTip Awarde
this should be under 'concrete', no?
do I really have to make an 'ascii art' category? [[would people use it if I did?]] la la la. cute, given its history.
be assured that dark-angel, settle, horus, and a few others will frequently make use of that category, lol.
amusing, cute, amazingly beautiful (somehow you pull it off)
heres an 8.
ps: it isnt as brilliant as the first one though.
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