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Lucky Joe Finds a Ring (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme stupid after drugs, means you
were a good actor
before meeting your wife,
who is more charming than you are
Up the ladder:
My Name Is Blood
Down the ladder:
Livin' With No Momma
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Posted: September 18, 2003 4:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2003 4:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4872 Comments:
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DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.172.61
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18-Sep-03/4:13 PM
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short, simple, amusing, and skips all the wonderfull birthday wrapping paper and extra tasteless icing.. more effective no? AYE? lucky joe, sometimes less is more..
Both charming and fragrant. A triumph! -6-
oh well, a six is better than 0-5.. (lee, cut the sugar coating and get back to work - BBAH fine, eat me, im jesus.. fuck.)
I don't get it. Am I on drugs?
.. -scratches his skull- well, its not that hard to understand..
are you on drugs? i am. 228 view(s)
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