Re: a comment on Always by hobojo	2-Jan-09/11:21 AM
Stop saying "I am a terrible writer.". You are good when you decide you're good-- confidence has many merits, and they are boundless. Doubtless you'll look back at the old pieces and shake your head in wonder as to how you conjured that shit up-- the weak points like bleeding bulletholes: Revise, twist, take risk, push your concepts as far as possible. Even failure is success when you take that and rewrite your blueprints having learned your particular strengths and weaknesses. You'll come to learn what works and what doesn't, it'll become instinctual. Pursue the thought that "I'm fuckin liquid fire flowing beneath the crust waiting to erupt." and write. Don't try, DO it, and do it relentlessly.
Re: a comment on 2012 - The Haiku Remix. by DreamerSupreme	2-Jan-09/5:53 AM
Holy shite, there be life here in the ghost-town known as rankerville!
Re: a comment on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote	15-Dec-08/7:45 AM
Your welcome. Take the anguish and conjure up the soul-- it is painful but, none-the-less, necessary.
Re: a comment on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote	15-Dec-08/7:43 AM
Tom, you know my fucking name. It's Lee. The same name I had when we were shooting up heroin in the bushes lining the chapel we camped at in Portland. !DOH!
Re: a comment on Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	15-Dec-08/7:34 AM
You'd never be able to find my hiding spots boy. You're addressing a professional steetbum, not a shoddy poser, you silly child!
Re: a comment on Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	15-Dec-08/7:32 AM
That's how I'd like to kill myself if I decided that that was the best option left to me. Sorry if that's too boring for you. I can characterize it and make it the suicide of a bisexual transvestite who is obsessed with occult ritual if you'd like. Being odd is not a difficult task for me. ;)
Re: a comment on Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	15-Dec-08/7:25 AM
Do your damned job and consume the weaklings. They're all-over the fucking rankerville dragging their wet blankets and spewing hallmark emo-love-thy-neighbor-and-honor-his-virgin-daughter baby shit all over the fucking place. You can oil thy own bum and then accept the rod of brutal disgrace. Do you not see that your horrid crustaceans have allowed the embrowning to envelope the whole bloody ship? Enough of indulging your twisted faggotry in the lower decks! Perfom thy holy function, you misplaced cumquat!!
Re: Broken Heart by Luul A	15-Dec-08/7:03 AM
Oh god, what a wet blanket dripping bedpee all-over the fucking place. What the fuck is wrong with you?
Re: Dancing with the Devil by Liam Wallace	15-Dec-08/7:01 AM
Don't question the meaning of the dance. Dance and let the meaning express itself. You get a three only because I like the title and you display a wee-bit of cleverness.
Re: A Way With Words by LARoundtree	15-Dec-08/6:57 AM
Take your hallmark style cliche and that didactic expression of a lambs vacuous ethic and go back to your "happy place". Stay there and don't sully the taste of those who sustain themselves on a diet of meat & cold glasses of reality. If you don't? You'll be the next chop that I devour in an act of savagery.
Re: Marrakech Watercolours by Caducus	15-Dec-08/6:47 AM
It's got soul. More soul than I posses.
Re: when light cannot see your face by daggatolar	15-Dec-08/6:44 AM
Apparently you also can not write either. Stop grasping for the appearance of profoundness. You haven't gripped upon anything but the air and your own literary flatulence.
Re: Always by hobojo	15-Dec-08/6:36 AM
The use of the word like in the manner you've employed it above? Don't. Saying "will forever last" in a vain attempt to avoid saying the tired "will last forever"? Don't. Repetetive redundancy? Eliminate it. If it's constant, then there's no need to say it'll last forever. Do not ever cheapen what you are trying to express in such ways. You need to reconsider the way you go about constructing your poems. Become thy editor motherfucker! Consider this: You are the eternal sundown setting, the distant rain pouring down, an ocean wave receding-- lingering in the distance just beyond my grasp. You are the ever-present reminder of pleasant memories; maintaining the sadness, making me yearn for the past. Yesterday has long since passed, but you're still here, always. --That's just a quickie example. Notice the difference?- Clear, fluid, with a crisp finish. It's not what you're saying, it's how you say it. Capiche? Find thy style and, by god, develop it.
Re: Surreptitious merchandise and company held here by A. Nomaly	15-Dec-08/2:12 AM
The ending seems purposely designed to confuse. That or you were seized by an epileptic episode.
Re: Realizations by hobojo	15-Dec-08/2:09 AM
Life sucks the soul right out of a ripe tit don't it?
Re: Daydream Delusions by hobojo	15-Dec-08/12:49 AM
The ghosts of our dreams grip us with the fingers of eternity... they are our real addiction- that which we see yet can not attain. Do not allow the misery or intoxication to warp thy craft with pimple-like amateurism. Seek to use these aspects of your mental enviroment to focus and sharpen the blade utilized in the execution. No Vote.
Re: Jealousy by Person	23-Apr-07/8:47 PM
Hello Rockmage. ;)
Re: Rap? Hip-hop? What has this thing become? by DreamerSupreme	23-Apr-07/8:38 PM
Like Nas said: Hip-Hop is dead.
Re: a comment on Ode to Brittanyy and her Dyke Jacket. by DreamerSupreme	23-Apr-07/8:10 PM
I know, I know... I'm a bad, bad man; what can I say?
Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	31-Jan-05/8:38 PM
Maybe they should award me the apathy harness.