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Jealousy (Haiku) by Person
You eat me inside I bow to you, weaken me My stomach tightens

Up the ladder: Clouds
Down the ladder: Aeroplanes and goslings

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9794
Posted: April 23, 2007 7:10 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2007 7:10 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 130.65.109.104 | 23-Apr-07/8:47 PM | Reply
Hello Rockmage. ;)
[n/a] half.italian @ 76.172.249.205 | 24-Apr-07/1:08 AM | Reply
Haikus
are not
short enough.
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