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Realizations (Free verse) by hobojo
Talking, sharing thoughts and stories
Realizing we are not so different
Feeling we are not alone
Connections in place of isolation
Interesting that after years
We still learn new things about our friends
And growth and laughter can still bring us closer
Interesting that we learn about ourselves most
When we engage ourselves in others lives
We gain perspective and insight
We grow, learn, and we see
That we should engage and stop daydreaming
We inspire each other to go forth into the night
Blind, but not afraid
For a life not lived is a life of heartbreak and regret
This year has shown me that I am no longer afraid
To live, to engage in my life
This year has also shown me that others are not so fortunate
And when the one you love is someone afraid of living
We must learn not to effect this at all
For we must each come to our own conclusions
Right or Wrong
We must all decide our own fates and truths
For we all have to look in a mirror, just as much
As we have to look at each other
So an end to my daydream delusions
I will not connect with this soul at this level
I can at least know that for once
I acted instead of watch
I tried instead of isolate
I tried for once to control my own fate
I failed, but I can move forward without that regret...
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8153
Posted: December 3, 2008 10:58 PM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2008 10:58 PM PST
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