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Daydream Delusions

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Dec 2008 · 1 comment

Daydream Delusions Candy coated pills Swallow, swallow Fade into the Blue For a moment, then Like an oceans wave Upon the shore Waves come crashing Back once more And time to swallow again More pills, smoke and gin Please end these delusions Where do I begin Holding on is hopeless For my desires will never be Sitting in the dark So patiently... Wanting, waiting, lonely Wanting, waiting, let's see... No... cause daydream delusions Are floating in the clouds Drifting in the air While I sit and watch with despair As my daydream delusions Disappear... and to watch I can not bare Why do I hold on to these delusions Why don't I want to let go... It's good to let go...

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[n/a] DreamerSupreme 15-Dec-08/12:49 AM Reply
The ghosts of our dreams grip us with the fingers of eternity... they are our real addiction- that which we see yet can not attain.

Do not allow the misery or intoxication to warp thy craft with pimple-like amateurism. Seek to use these aspects of your mental enviroment to focus and sharpen the blade utilized in the execution.

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