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Hey (Free verse) by impert&ent Retracing some steps
Wandering some forgotten lines of thought
Turning some corners in a disused hall of memories
The sun has set
I've got the light on
But it's not exactly illuminated in here
So I traipse around the hallucinations of mind and internet
Looking for some bright spot
Some invitation in that fading light
Up the ladder:
Pause
Down the ladder:
A sky not our own
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Posted: May 22, 2013 2:00 PM PDT; Last modified: February 7, 2016 7:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1422777 Overall Rank: 5483 Comments:
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ARTIE @ 127.0.0.1
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28-Oct-14/1:30 PM
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When lit only by a fading memory, it's the sleeping neurons that require enlight-&-ment.
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