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Hey

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 May 2013 · Edited 7 Feb 2016 · 2 comments

Retracing some steps Wandering some forgotten lines of thought Turning some corners in a disused hall of memories The sun has set I've got the light on But it's not exactly illuminated in here So I traipse around the hallucinations of mind and internet Looking for some bright spot Some invitation in that fading light

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[2] ARTIE 28-Oct-14/1:30 PM Reply
When lit only by a fading memory, it's the sleeping neurons that require enlight-&-ment.
[8] Lenore 16-Oct-17/1:31 PM Reply
See me.