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Hey (Free verse) by impert&ent
Retracing some steps Wandering some forgotten lines of thought Turning some corners in a disused hall of memories The sun has set I've got the light on But it's not exactly illuminated in here So I traipse around the hallucinations of mind and internet Looking for some bright spot Some invitation in that fading light

Up the ladder: butterfly
Down the ladder: Waking

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5422
Posted: May 22, 2013 2:00 PM PDT; Last modified: February 7, 2016 7:27 PM PST
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[2] ARTIE @ 127.0.0.1 | 28-Oct-14/1:30 PM | Reply
When lit only by a fading memory, it's the sleeping neurons that require enlight-&-ment.
[8] Lenore @ ::1 | 16-Oct-17/1:31 PM | Reply
See me.
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