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Surreptitious merchandise and company held here (Free verse) by A. Nomaly
No where is it seen, the old ways kept meticulously inside muscles Kurt held and held all he wanted Sara held and held all she wanted to the treasure, the gold, the green growing tree planted long ago with careful compost, deteriorating nutrients, end become end The tree is across the street. Ribbons and roses and spirit houses around it, the tamarind tree roots pushed up the sidewalk even, now uneven, now even, dug out excavation of those roots. The tree careful is across the street, seen

Up the ladder: GENTLE JANE
Down the ladder: Come Winter, I say!

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6937
Posted: December 3, 2008 12:26 AM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2008 12:26 AM PST
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[6] DreamerSupreme @ 75.18.164.147 | 15-Dec-08/2:12 AM | Reply
The ending seems purposely designed to confuse. That or you were seized by an epileptic episode.
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