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when light cannot see your face (Free verse) by daggatolar
when light cannot see my face the pale fear i wear can only in the dark live tell me friend ....Oh enemy how you can hate me to die for me for only then can i die i can see all the light there is in the sun ... to see and know danger when light cannot see my face i cannot understand

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11407
Posted: December 1, 2008 1:48 AM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2008 1:48 AM PST
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[0] DreamerSupreme @ 75.18.164.147 | 15-Dec-08/6:44 AM | Reply
Apparently you also can not write either. Stop grasping for the appearance of profoundness. You haven't gripped upon anything but the air and your own literary flatulence.
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