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Free verse № 156348

when light cannot see your face

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Dec 2008 · 1 comment

when light cannot see my face the pale fear i wear can only in the dark live tell me friend ....Oh enemy how you can hate me to die for me for only then can i die i can see all the light there is in the sun ... to see and know danger when light cannot see my face i cannot understand

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[0] DreamerSupreme 15-Dec-08/6:44 AM Reply
Apparently you also can not write either. Stop grasping for the appearance of profoundness. You haven't gripped upon anything but the air and your own literary flatulence.