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Broken Heart (Ode) by Luul A
Breath colder than a winter's day
Heart darker when you're away
Even when love sets in motion
Sorrow is deeper than the ocean
Tears streaming down my face
Faster than a lion chasing his prey
Watching you lay lifeless on the cold ground
Feels like a lost pain that has been found
It's making me loose my mind
Its a feeling thats not so kind
Sirens screaming, tires screeching
Mothers crying, teachers preaching
Victims dying, siblings sighing
All kinds of sounds ringing in my head
It was something that has been said
I let you step out of the house so you could experience life
Didn't they know you had a son waitng for you at home as well as a wife
I thought you would come back soon
Until the time went by from morning to noon
But a world of cruelity and violence was where I forgot we lived in
Didn't they know killing is a sin?
I cried my heart out knowing you were gone
Did they think that losing you was a game that they had won?
You were my baby and my most valued possesion
Couldn't they see what they created was a family who would forever live
in depression
You belonged to me and you were to stay with me
Didn't they see that we were meant to be?
But somewhere from outside came the vicious monster and stole your life
away
My body became tense and my heart grew weak everyday
You were the innocent you didn't have to die
The pain was severe and the only thing I could do was cry
Even though things would no longer be the same
Now I know that your time came
Just remember that there were people who still loved you
And no matter where you are would still remember you
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11493
Posted: November 23, 2008 8:19 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2008 8:19 AM PST
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